At present, it has been
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that the relationship between individual accomplishment and equal rights
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developing day by day. Certain people believe that a
person
can reach the peak of success
while
living in identical communities.
On the other hand
, another group of people convey that one can gain whatever he wants from his career only when he does not have any boundaries for being
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or unsuccessful owing to his personal strength. In the forthcoming paragraph, I will explain both
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explanation.
To begin
with, equal realm refers to a community where all the people get the same facilities from that realm.
Moreover
, the laws enforce equally among the public. So, it does not matter if the
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person
is rich or poor, he will receive the exact punishment. For
this
, whenever a
person
will think to do something illegal, deep in his mind he will be scared because of the regulations.
As a result
, there will be less crime in the region.
For example
, in an identical place, an individual does not have to worry about the environment, he can only focus
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achievement without worrying about other aspects of life.
Hence
, after
he will get a decent job
according to
his merit as there is no corruption in the corporate field because of the same priority.
Alternatively, others hold the opinion that a
person
can be successful in a free country where he has the autonomy to do things
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the way he wants.
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he has
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if he is not able to score
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the test, he can not get a good job. In
this
case, if the
person
has money and power, he not only gets the score but
also
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the perfect employment for him.
For instance
, I have seen one of my friends
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doing a job in a high position in a pharmaceutical company after graduating. He was not better
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top of that he always copied me. I had to struggle a lot for getting
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, as I did not know anyone from the field. The reason why he got it
due to
his dad, who was a production manager of that company.
To sum up
, from my perspective, I believe each side has
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society. Government should ensure strict regulations and laws in the country.
Therefore
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must follow the rules provided by the authority.