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An increasing number of professional such as doctor and teacher are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. what problem does this cause ? what can be done to deal with this situation ?

#doctor #teacher #countries #work #situation
It is well-established fact that most
of
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well-educated
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peoples
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people
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 have
tendency
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a tendency
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 to emigrate from their undeveloped
country
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countries
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 to developed
countries
.In
this
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 I will explain my
toughts
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thoughts
 regarding
topic
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the topic
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 and I will give some possible solutions. There are a lot of factors that lead
to
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some sophisticated
people
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choose
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 developed
countries
 for their
career
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 and
live
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.
To begin
 with, in some poor
countries
 there are
not
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no
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 appropriate wages or job opportunities for skilled
people
.
for example
,recent research in
india
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India
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 illustrates
teachers
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teachers'
teacher's
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 salaries
is
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are
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 even less than labourers.Or the government or society
dont
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don't
 pay enough attention to some professional and well-informed
people
such
 as doctors or
scientist
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scientists
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.All of
this
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these
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 reasons persuade professional
peoples
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people
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 to emigrate to developed
countries
 for
better
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a better
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 life. In order to solve
this
 problem,First of all, the
government
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 duties in
this
 issue should not be taken lightly.Authorities should improve the condition for knowledgeable
people
 or increase the
amount
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 of their wages and they can
also
 dedicate some benefit to encourage them to stay in their country.these skilled
people
 not only can improve the condition in healthcare sectors but
also
 every
nations
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 for advancement in many aspects need educated
people
 to save their country from poverty and
illeteracy
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illiteracy
.
To sum up
,with cooperation with the government and educated
people
,under-developed
countries
 can succeed and conquer
from
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poverty and illiteracy.
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