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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Give reason for your answer and include relevant example from your experience or knowledge

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Nowadays, most of the graduated
students
 from 3rd
world
 regions are trying to migrate to 1st
world
 regions, in order to gain the best educational opportunities. In my ,opinion it is the right idea and
this
 ideology has more advantages than its disadvantages.
To begin
 with, studying abroad for a PhD or MSc is the most convenient way to move and settle in a developed
country
. Apart from that, having an education in a good state provides not only the best learning chances but
also
 the quality of life.
Furthermore
, even after completing 1 year or 2 years of studies,
students
 are able to find a permanent job opportunity in
this
 first
world
country
, since it has huge opportunities than in 3rd
world
country
.
For instance
, countries like Sri Lanka, provide almost all the facilities in order to complete a bachelor's degree. But it can not facilitate the researchers for a PhD or MSc. So most of the fresh graduates are trying to move to a European state.
In contrast
, most of the newly migrated
students
 missed their homes and families.
Although
 migrating to a well-developed nation was their dream, they feel stressed when they try to adapt to the new environment. Sometimes people are not very friendly enough to deal with.
For example
, some
students
 who moved to a developed
country
 for their
further
 studies, ascertain that they really missed their homes, especially when they get sick and alone in a new environment.
To conclude
, Fresh migrants may feel it is difficult to adjust and cope with the new habitat. But after a few years and once they adapt, it surely becomes the best place for them to live and earn.
Moreover
, they can enjoy their life in productive surroundings. So it appears that there are more benefits than drawbacks.
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