The graph below shows how money was spent on differentforms of entertainment.

The graph below shows how money was spent on differentforms of entertainment.
The information about the money spent on different types of
entertainment
sources during the five years was illustrated in a bar graph.
Overall
, it can be evident that Publishing makes up the highest percentage.
While
the figure for cinemas is by far the least.
To begin
with, in 1995, Publishing
entertainment
increased and stood at 50% .
However
, over the following year 2000, it reached significantly at a peak of 200%.
After
this
, Television
entertainment
riser from 1995 to 2000 and spent 100% of the money on
entertainment
. Probing
further
, similar Cinemas and videos witnessed the same trend. Starting at only short spending but in the following ,years it increases slightly. There was a dramatic increase noticed in music from 55 to 250. During
this
money spend on music.
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