People who are addicted to drugs should be imprisoned as they have broke the law, other say the they should be in hospitals. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Some would argue that people who are drug
addicts
should be sent to prison because they have broken the law, Use synonyms
while
others say that they are sick and they should be taken to hospitals. Linking Words
Although
sending them to jail will help them to think about their action, Linking Words
this
essay will support that drug Linking Words
addicts
must be hospitalized to rehabilitate them.
On the one hand, members who abuse drugs excessively must be imprisoned in jail as it enables them to rethink their lives. Most of the people are in prison Use synonyms
as a result
of abusing Class A medications like pethidine and Linking Words
this
gives them the opportunity to think about their lives and Linking Words
this
is done by interacting with their fellows. Linking Words
Furthermore
, being unable to go back Linking Words
at the end
of the day and sleeping in a small confined place, all make them rethink what they would actually want for themselves. Linking Words
For example
, in Uganda, around 40% of youth are put in different jails Linking Words
due to
their bad behaviour after taking codeine, but Linking Words
this
does not solve their problems.
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On the other hand
, despite the above point, l believe that members who are addicted to opioids should be sent to hospitals for rehabilitation as Linking Words
this
is the only way to cure them. Linking Words
In other words
, they are sick because of the addiction and confining them in an area Linking Words
that is
free from drugs and safe will not only help them get treated but it will Linking Words
also
enable them to get back to their normal senses. Linking Words
For instance
, research done at Makerere University shows that around 70% of drug Linking Words
addicts
recover when taken to rehabilitation places. Use synonyms
Therefore
l agree with treating them more than sending them to jail.
In conclusion, Linking Words
although
some people say that Linking Words
addicts
should be sent to cells as punishment after breaking the law, l think sending them to hospitals for treatment is better as it helps them to get cured. I hope in future the state will consider my view in order to save them.Use synonyms
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