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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The statement suggests that printed
newspapers
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 and
books
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 will become redundant in the future
due to
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 the prevalence of digital technology and the availability of free online
content
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.
While
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 digital
content
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 has grown in popularity, it is not necessarily true that printed
materials
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 will completely disappear.
Although
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 it is true that digital
content
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 has become more accessible and popular, it does not necessarily mean that
people
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 will stop reading printed
books
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 and
newspapers
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. There are
people
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 who still prefer to read physical
books
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 and
newspapers
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 as it provides a different kind of experience compared to reading from a screen. For some, holding a book or a newspaper, flipping through pages, and being able to physically interact with the material can be more enjoyable and less
straining
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 on their eyes.
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,
while
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 there is a lot of online
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 available for free, not all of it is of high quality or can be reliable. Many publishers and
newspapers
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 have implemented paywalls, requiring readers to subscribe or pay for access to their
content
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.
Thus
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, not all online
content
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 is available for free.
Furthermore
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, online reading can be more superficial and less engaging compared to reading from printed
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. Reading online often involves multitasking, which can take away from the focus and enjoyment of reading.
People
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 tend to skim or scan online
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 rather than
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 it in-depth. In conclusion,
while
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 digital
content
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 has grown in popularity and accessibility, it is unlikely that printed
materials
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 will become completely obsolete in the future.
People
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 will always have a preference for physical
books
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 and
newspapers
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, and the quality, reliability, and engagement of printed
materials
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 cannot always be replicated online.
However
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, the prevalence of digital
content
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 is likely to continue to grow, and publishers and
content
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 creators will need to adapt to the changing landscape to remain relevant and profitable.
Overall
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, it is important to recognize that both printed and digital
materials
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 have their own unique advantages and limitations.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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