As major cities around the world are growing, so are their problems. What are these problems for young people living in cities? What are possible solutions for these problems?

Now in the 21st
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the world is developing as fast as possible. At the same time, the population is
also
growing. In
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we will discuss how a growing population affects the universe. And as
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our peace grows and improves the problems in our system
also
increase.
Firstly
,
according to
statistics calculated at the Harvard Institute, the number of people who smoke is increasing every year, which
also
has a significant impact on our environment.
Secondly
,
along with
the development of
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building
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, the number of cars whose exhaust smoke spoils
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air that we breathe is
also
increasing. In conclusion, I would like to say that if humanity switches to a more healthy and active lifestyle,
then
our world would improve noticeably in a fairly short period of time. Please do not be indifferent to the world in which the next generation will live, because the future state of our home depends on them.
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