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The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, *20…, and future projections for 2025.

The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, *20…, and future projections for 2025.
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The bar chart illustrates the data about Southland’s main
exports
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 in the following areas, international
tourism
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,
dairy
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products
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 and
meat
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products
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 in 2000, 2023, and 2025.
Overall
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, international
tourism
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 has the biggest amount of
exports
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 in all years,
however
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,
meat
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products
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 show the least portion of
exports
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 in that period.
Additionally
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,
dairy
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 export has an unstable rise during that decade. In 2000, international travel presents a great increase in other
exports
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, over eight
billion
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.
Secondly
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 is
dairy
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 farm production with seven
billion
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 and
finally
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 the
meat
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products
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 with exactly six
billion
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.
In contrast
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, in 2023, international
tourism
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 is the second in order, above nine
billion
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, but
dairy
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products
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 are first in Southland’s main transport with over ten
billion
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. And as expected the
meat
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products
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 have decreased from six to five and a half
billion
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 during 2023.
In addition
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 to that, from the future projection for 2025, we can see that international
tourism
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 will considerably grow to ten
billion
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, which is the same number the
dairy
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products
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 had in 2023. After that, we can understand that
dairy
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 manufacturing will go down to nine and a half
billion
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 and
also
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 the
meat
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products
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 drop down to five
billion
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, tourism, dairy, products, meat, billion with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exports, main exports, projections, trends, significant changes, increased, decreased, speculate, external factors, global demand, technological advancements, trade policies, agriculture, technology, manufacturing, economic implications, employment, GDP, economic growth, global economic trends
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