The graph below shows the numbers of overseas visitors who went to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of travellers who visited the coast
,the mountains and the lakes
,between 1987 and 2007.
Overall
,from the beginning,visits to the lakes
have rocketed sharply,while
the number
of applied number
travels had a steady decline.Last
,but not least the amount
of applied mountain visitors
decreased gently.
At the start,the outsider was a number
of the lakes
travels,which was ten thousand
.However
,from 1987 to 2002,it applied rocketed from ten to about seventy-five thousand
.After that big splash,the number
of visitors
started to decline and did it till the end.Perhaps,it will continue to fall
.
However
,The mountain visitors
had second place and had a number
of twenty thousand
.After 1987 it had gently risen,however
after,that it started to fall
.Surprisingly,in the gap between 1992 and,1997 it grew from twenty to thirty thousand
.While
the lake's number
of visitors
rise,the mountain ones had a gentle fall
again.However
,in the next,years it had a decrease.
The leader of the group,the coast
visitors
amount
had a fall
till 1992.Then
,like the lakes
' number
,the coast
amount
had risen sharply and till the 2000th had grown almost apply 100%.It seemed that the lake's number
will be the leader ,due to
the coast
number
continuing to grow,while
the lake's amount
had fallen sharply.In the end,the cost number
was still the leaderSubmitted by andriykolomiyets12 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, coast, lakes, amount, visitors, thousand, fall with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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