The graph below shows the numbers of overseas visitors who went to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the numbers of overseas visitors who went to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of travellers who visited the
coast
,the mountains and the
lakes
,between 1987 and 2007.
Overall
,from the beginning,visits to the
lakes
have rocketed sharply,
while
the
number
of applied
number
travels had a steady decline.
Last
,but not least the
amount
of applied mountain
visitors
decreased gently. At the start,the outsider was a
number
of the
lakes
travels,which was ten
thousand
.
However
,from 1987 to 2002,it applied rocketed from ten to about seventy-five
thousand
.After that big splash,the
number
of
visitors
started to decline and did it till the end.Perhaps,it will continue to
fall
.
However
,The mountain
visitors
had second place and had a
number
of twenty
thousand
.After 1987 it had gently risen,
however
after,that it started to
fall
.Surprisingly,in the gap between 1992 and,1997 it grew from twenty to thirty
thousand
.
While
the lake's
number
of
visitors
rise,the mountain ones had a gentle
fall
again.
However
,in the next,years it had a decrease. The leader of the group,the
coast
visitors
amount
had a
fall
till 1992.
Then
,like the
lakes
'
number
,the
coast
amount
had risen sharply and till the 2000th had grown almost apply 100%.It seemed that the lake's
number
will be the leader ,
due to
the
coast
number
continuing to grow,
while
the lake's
amount
had fallen sharply.In the end,the cost
number
was still the leader
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