The graph below shows the numbers of overseas visitors who went to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the numbers of overseas visitors who went to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
number
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of travellers who visited the
coast
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,the mountains and the
lakes
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,between 1987 and 2007.
Overall
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,from the beginning,visits to the
lakes
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have rocketed sharply,
while
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the
number
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of applied
number
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travels had a steady decline.
Last
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,but not least the
amount
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of applied mountain
visitors
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decreased gently. At the start,the outsider was a
number
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of the
lakes
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travels,which was ten
thousand
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.
However
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,from 1987 to 2002,it applied rocketed from ten to about seventy-five
thousand
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.After that big splash,the
number
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of
visitors
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started to decline and did it till the end.Perhaps,it will continue to
fall
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.
However
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,The mountain
visitors
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had second place and had a
number
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of twenty
thousand
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.After 1987 it had gently risen,
however
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after,that it started to
fall
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.Surprisingly,in the gap between 1992 and,1997 it grew from twenty to thirty
thousand
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.
While
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the lake's
number
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of
visitors
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rise,the mountain ones had a gentle
fall
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again.
However
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,in the next,years it had a decrease. The leader of the group,the
coast
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visitors
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amount
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had a
fall
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till 1992.
Then
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,like the
lakes
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'
number
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,the
coast
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amount
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had risen sharply and till the 2000th had grown almost apply 100%.It seemed that the lake's
number
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will be the leader ,
due to
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the
coast
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number
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continuing to grow,
while
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the lake's
amount
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had fallen sharply.In the end,the cost
number
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was still the leader
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, coast, lakes, amount, visitors, thousand, fall with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rocketed" was used 2 times.
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