Some people think that children should obey rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Other people think that children controlled too much cannot deal with problems themselves in adulthood. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that the young are nurtured more carefully and receive top priority than they did in the past. Some people think that

children

should follow the rules and only take action whenever they are allowed by

adults

to avoid risk.

While

this

thinking is valid to a certain extent, I believe that overcontrolling

kids

would have an adverse bearing on their well-being.

In contrast

, giving them freedom of choice could bring several benefits.

To begin

with, there are admittedly several benefits to

kids

if they are docile and follow the rules of

adults

and teachers. First and foremost, under the observation of their parents or teachers, the young would avoid many prevailing risks

such

as being injured or kidnapped.

Moreover

, most of the tasks

adults

request

children

to do are to support them in holing practical skills and gaining knowledge from what they do.

However

, despite the aforementioned advantages, I would contend that

this

would engender some valid concerns. Owning to the fact that

children

are always supported by their parents or teachers, which could make them lose their confidence and be ambiguous to solve problems themselves when they grow up because they are used to being dependent on

adults

since their childhood.

On the other hand

, giving

kids

exemption incentivizes the curiosity to discover things around them, which can be of paramount importance.

Due to

the fact that they freely do what they wish to do and are not being forced for unwanted tasks, which is a key factor for them to independently solve their own problems and to be more decisive and more confident in making decisions.

However

, in my opinion, there are a plethora of dangers parents have to take into consideration for giving

children

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abundance of freedom. Without control and adequate guidance, the young tend to face several problems

such

as having inappropriate behaviours, being rebellious and violent, etc. In conclusion, I would argue that

adults

should make

kids

feel free to make their own choices and give some pieces of advice at the right time in order to achieve their full potential.