2.Some high school leavers tent to travel or work while before going to university directly. What do you think are the advantages more than disadvantages?

As the world keeps developing, youngsters, nowadays, adopt numerous ways of skills, after finishing high school program some of them have a tendency toward travelling and working before enrolling in a university program. Personally, I believe that having living experiences first can benefit leavers in some equal measures but

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have several drawbacks.

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bias partly damages the adolescents' study process.

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, as the stresses and difficulties from the workplace can negatively affect the youngsters' mentality,

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, gaining experience, they

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approach financial

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which are the fundamental conditions of living,

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, their mentality might deteriorate. A student,

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, when he or she has no experience and encounters an aggressive complaint from customers, can lead to a spiritual shock.

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, visiting places

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not having enough knowledge about the world may lead them to scam or bully even worse. India,

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, is a dangerous country where kidnaps and robberies are likely to

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they accidentally travel to

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country may cause severe

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for them.

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, travelling and working can benefit them in many manners. To start with, youngsters can gain more realistic experiences. To cite an example, An American adolescent, when they travel to Viet Nam or Thai Land, could experience how a democratic government works in Viet Nam else they can find unique ways of cooking street food in Thai Land.

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, working allows them to enhance and improve their mentality in some measures. As they have undergone

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in the workplace

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complaints from customers or bosses,

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could shed light on controlling their emotions and facing

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, I acknowledge that, in some measures, people might find travelling and working before enrolling in university could be a drawback. But in my opinion,

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idea is completely flawless.