The car is a disastrous 20th Century invention that has made the world’s cities more dangerous and polluted, as well as being responsible for the deaths of millions of people in accidents. Do you agree or disagree?

We are living in the salad days of the

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, where generations find it an arduous task to

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with the advances in technology. Different modes of commuting

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one of the most pertinent and inevitable

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of globalisation. Some people

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that

cars

are egregious inventions which

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increase

pollution, and made roads perilous causing millions of deaths. I

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disagree

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with

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opinion and

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that

cars

are pertinent for daily life. In

this

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we delve into the reasons for the disagreement. To commence with the facet of the

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agreement

, there are a myriad of things that needs to be shared in

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favour. Primarily,

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cars

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lots of

time

,

that

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otherwise

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transport. For

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instance

, people who

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to take

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to

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to start

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journey earlier to

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remunerate

enumerate

the walking

time

to the bus stop

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and the waiting

time

. The additional

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is often loaned either from the family bonding

time

or from the sleeping hours, which exhausts the individual.

This

further

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work productivity.

Secondly

,

cars

are more comfortable and secure when compared to buses

ands

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and

trains. The privacy provided by the

cars

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vital especially for

women

in the community. One clear example is the

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highest

rate of crime

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against

women

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in subways and metro trains in the United States. The roof of the

cars

provide

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a sense of security to

women

and children to travel at any

time

of the day.

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,

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further

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provides

sense of

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ownership

and empowerment for

women

.

Additionally

, commuting in

cars

saves a hefty amount of money, especially when you are travelling with the family. In

additon

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addition

to saving money, there are spots and scenic places that can only be reached with

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private transport

such

as Yarra Valley in Victoria. Visiting

such

beautiful places can ignite a fresh feeling and can ameliorate

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mental health. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that despite

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all the disadvantages,

cars

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more benefits in the daily life of an individual and

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one of the most pertinent

discoceries

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discoveries

of the century. The

disadvanatges

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disadvantages

can be reduced by stringent measures by the government.