Nowadays tourism has great impact on society. Do you agree or disagree.

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society

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great

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crash from the

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traveler

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in life. I do agree because

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tourism

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bring

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a lot of money when they visit some destinations, and

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community

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can get new

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knowledge

of

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visitors. The visitors

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visit a destination, and

definetly

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definitely

bring

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money for buying some needs of the

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seller

caller

.

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because, if the

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traveler

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want

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to survive in

a places

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places

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, they should buy a

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in the local market.

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societ

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society

definetly

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definitely

sell

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a necessity

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tourism

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, and if the

community

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get great income it can help in

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life.

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Bali

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there

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many

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tourism

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from different countries, and the local

community

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know that there is a bullet for increasing daily income.

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, the local public

build

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a market, and they sell several interesting

need

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such

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as

,

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traditional food,

local

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accomodation

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accommodation

. It can make

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tourism

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feel useful for their

surviving

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in the places.

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could get many

comperessions

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compressions

compression

of the

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traveler

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when they communicate with each other.

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to say,

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tourism

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has a lot of

differents

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knowladge

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knowledge

and

culture

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. If

between

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and

tourism

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transfer something, it might

can

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make their

usderstanding

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understanding

with

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each other.

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destination to visit for people because in there is many

destiantion

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destination

destinations

, so the public could get new

knowladge

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knowledge

from

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tourism

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, and they can exchange some cultures,

knowladges

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knowledge

knowledges

or information.

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are

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great positive impact

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public

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when the

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traveler

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traveller

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overtake

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the places. Where possible, between

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traveler

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traveller

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and

community

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should give a

provit

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profit

for improving

team work

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, and

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give feeling comfortable to the

tourism

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.