modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children .many children suffer because they donnot get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. Do you agree or disagree?
In
this
modern era, people are running with hectic schedules. Therefore
, people have less time for children
. As a result
, children
suffer from mental problems, they are not able to get attention from their parents
compared to the past year. In this
essay, I will elaborate on more details and thus
lead to a logical conclusion.
First of all, children
are facing so many difficulties in their environment, and they are able to share the routine life with their parents
. It increases the gaps between parents
and children
. Furthermore
, children
are getting low grades in the academic records because there's no help from parents
to clear their doubts. In addition
, parents
don't even have time to attend the annual events. According to
a recent survey conducted by BBC Channel, more than 40% of children
complain about their parent's attention.
Nevertheless
, it is evidently clear that the
catering Correct article usage
apply
of
the needed love and attention to Change preposition
apply
offsprings
plays a major role in their emotional development; it helps them significantly to be healthy adults down the road.To illustrate, teenagers strive to care and benevolence more than materialistic items for their emotional Fix the agreement mistake
offspring
well being
. Add a hyphen
well-being
For instance
, this
has scientifically
proven by Add a missing verb
been scientifically
a
research conducted by Cambridge University which emphasizes the fact that successful and wealthy people have caring Correct article usage
apply
parents
who kept an eye on them.Thus
, they grow up confident and secure.
In conclusion, in the
light of what Correct article usage
apply
have
been discussed above. Change the verb form
has
However
, parents
have too much responsibility, they should not ignore their offsprings'
desires and they have to strike a balance between their personal and practical lifeChange noun form
offspring's
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