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Some people point that experiential learning (i.e. learning by doing it) can work well in formal education. However, others think a traditional form of teaching is the best. Do you think experiential learning can work well in high schools or colleges?

#people #point #e #work #education #form #schools #colleges
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The bar chart illustrates the worth of one country’s exports in different types of
products
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 throughout 2015 and 2016
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 the table below demonstrates the proportion change in value in 2016 compared with that in the previous year. Looking
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 at
exports
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export
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 revenue, the amount of all goods has grown from 2015 to 2016 except gems and
jewelry
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. We can see that in 2015 and 2016, the two primary sources of income for
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 nation were petroleum and engineered
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. Their worths were about 60$ and 56$ respectively and went up more than 60$. Agricultural
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 and textiles both rose roughly 32$ in 2016.
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, gems and
jewelry
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 were the only items to decrease in price, from around 43 to 41 dollars. Compared with the four remaining types of goods, textiles had the largest growth during 2015 and 2016 in value with a rate of 15.24%. Petroleum, engineered, and agricultural
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 followed to go up at 3%, 8.5%, and 0.81% respectively.
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, gems and
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 dropped by 5.18%.
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