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The table below shows the number of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014.

The table below shows the number of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014.
the table compares the numbers of five kinds of
vehicles
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 that were registered in Australia in three different years, 2010,2012 and 2014.
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, it can be seen clearly that all types of
vehicles
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 witnessed a rise during the period shown.
While
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 the figure for passenger
vehicles
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 always ranked top, motorcycles underwent the quickest change in 3 years. In 2010, the number of Passenger
vehicles
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 registered was 11 million, which is much higher than that of Commercial, at only 2,3 million. Over the next 4 years, there was a climb to 13 million in the number of Passenger
vehicles
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 registered, which accounted for 18,2% changes,
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 there were more than 4 thousand Commercial
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 registered, a rise of 17,4%. turning to the remaining types of
vehicles
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, the greatest increase was recorded for Mortocycles, which grew from 570,000 in 2010 to 745,000 in 2014, an increase of 30%. During the same period, the number of Heavy and Light Trucks registered
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 rose, by 10,2% and 23,5% respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words vehicles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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