Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Few folks opt to follow a vegetarian diet as they think it is healthier for them

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benefits the entire world. It is the choice of every individual to follow only a plant-based diet or to include meat and fish. In my opinion, following a non-vegetarian diet can have some adverse effects on

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health. The primary reason why it is considered unhealthy is that it is difficult to digest.

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can lead to digestion issues.

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, they can

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suffer from other issues

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as gastric diseases and acidity.

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, consumption of the infected animals can cause severe illness.

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, during the outbreak of bird

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everyone was advised not to eat chicken.

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, the animals are injected with

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to grow faster or to lay more eggs. These chemicals are introduced

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the body by consuming

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food products.

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, having vegetarian meals can

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benefit the environment and

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the world. Consumption of fish and other animals can disturb the balance of the ecosystem. The disturbance in the food pyramid can prove to be fatal for some species.

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, excessive fishing can reduce the number of fish in the ocean which would be the food for the larger fishes

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as the shark.

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, the survival of sharks would be extremely difficult and the entire ocean life will be impacted.

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, plant-based eating habits can

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provide the same nutrients as seafood and poultry products.

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, it

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helps us to maintain the balance in the world and make it a better place to live for everyone.

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