some people use socialmedia to keep in touch with others and new events do you think advantages this techniques outweight the dis advantages
Technology has blessed
with
myriads of miracles . Social Correct pronoun usage
us with
media
is a
one among them , it is Correct article usage
apply
a
best alternative to be in touch with everyone even Change the article
the
at
the opposite pole of the globe .In my opinion , ample Correct pronoun usage
those at
of
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apply
pros
that social Correct article usage
the pros
media
have are outwieghing
the cons .
Social Correct your spelling
outweighing
media
have a
innumerable benefits . Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Firstly
, it enable
the users to get in touch with their relatives , Change the verb form
enables
freinds
etcetera via audio calls Correct your spelling
friends
as well as
video calls on facetime , Skype , Snapchat and many other platforms . It helps the
immigrants who are far away from their families by coping Correct article usage
apply
up
with homesickness . Change preposition
apply
For instance
, according to
research
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the research
of
New York University , Change preposition
by
due to
various social media
apps , the
90% of people Correct article usage
apply
are
recovering from depression and anxiety Unnecessary verb
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who
are living far away from their homes only because they are in connection with their parents via social Correct pronoun usage
apply
media
.Secondly
, it lowers not only the commuting costs but also
save
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saves
traveling
time , because in ancient times people had to travel to look Change the spelling
travelling
their
loved ones but now they are only one call away from each Change preposition
after their
others
.Change to a singular noun
other
Last
but not least perk of social media
, it enable
the viewers to know about the incidents and information of Change the verb form
enables
whole
world by just scrolling Change the article
the whole
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through facebook
facebook
or Change the capitalization
Facebook
instagram
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Instagram
etecetera
.Correct your spelling
etcetera
Furthermore
, one can share their posts and pictures with anyone .
Every good thing have
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has
dark
side ,Add an article
a dark
likewise
social Add a comma
,likewise
media
is disadvantageous in some ways , first and foremost it promotes the
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apply
sedantary
lifestyles , ultimately Correct your spelling
sedentary
gives
birth to many health ailments Wrong verb form
giving
such
as obesity , weak eyesight and depression and so on . Moreover
, it reduces the
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apply
in person
meetings by giving preference to virtual meetings . Add a hyphen
in-person
Consequently
, it effects
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affects
the
body language and social Correct article usage
apply
ettiquetes
,because everyone prefers to talk by phone Correct your spelling
etiquettes
etiquette
instead
of meeting face to face .
To conclude
, social media
have certain drawbacks but its benefits can not be ignored . It ease
the survival of people by providing them with Change the verb form
eases
lot
of features like Change the article
a lot
audio visual
calls and sharing videos and pictures Add a hyphen
audio-visual
in
between them .Change preposition
apply
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