Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.
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computers
are being more and more in education, whilst some think that is
leading to negative consequences. I prefer,
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computer
will Fix the agreement mistake
computers
use
in education, however
it is more useful and Add a comma
however,
this
is a positive trend. To illustrate computers
suitable
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are suitable
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using
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and
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essay will examine both sides. On the other
hand
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hand,
computers
has
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have
a
pile of information, valuable education, news, different videos, and music to compare in Add the preposition
with a
computer
should teach play the guitar and learn some other languages, Add an article
the computer
available
information about other cultures. If the weather is cold and you are Correct word choice
and available
teacher
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a teacher
also
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apply
people
would spend lesson
online format may be Fix the agreement mistake
lessons
zoom
, Capitalize word
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whatsapp
, Correct your spelling
WhatsApp
facebook
. I prefer will live modern and should Correct word choice
or facebook
be
meet modern requirements because nowadays it is Unnecessary verb
apply
trend
. Add an article
a trend
the trend
On the other
hand
others argue that it Add a comma
hand,
is leading
to negative consequences reason behind Wrong verb form
leads
this
is that If chilndren
or teenagers Correct your spelling
children
had been
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apply
used
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use
computer
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computers
from
negative sights Change preposition
for
for instance
used 3 or 4 times a day there
will Correct pronoun usage
they
be
poor eyesight, and think slowly, Verb problem
have
there
will be lazy and does not succed. Scientists saidCorrect pronoun usage
they
,
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apply
if
children from 3 years will Correct word choice
that if
use
mobile phone
namely children can not speak Fix the agreement mistake
phones
and
leading to negative Correct word choice
apply
consequence
. Scientists prefer children Fix the agreement mistake
consequences
does
not Unnecessary verb
apply
use
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it during
during
3 years old. In conclusion Change preposition
until
people
will use
computers
positive
sights since Change preposition
for positive
it
will Correct pronoun usage
they
be change
your Change the verb form
change
life
better than Fix the agreement mistake
lives
the
past Change preposition
in the
in particular
people
always will know about news
, live modern requirements. Correct article usage
the news
Computer
will Add an article
The computer
use
an
hour or quarter Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
minutes
. Change preposition
of minutes
Who
Correct pronoun usage
Those who
lives
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live
correclty
that Correct your spelling
correctly
people
reached
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reach
your
Correct pronoun usage
their
achievment
will be successful and be educated, conscientious,Correct your spelling
achievement
and
generous, industrious.Correct word choice
apply
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion