The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

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The bar chart below gives information about what

people

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used to commute from and to their workplace in a certain city in Europe for 40 years. Generally, the preferable mode of

transportation

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was changed every 20 years. At the beginning of the period which is 1960, most

people

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use the bus as the main

transportation

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to travel to and from work almost 40% of the population.

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, the car is the least

transportation

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used by

people

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with only 7% of its population. In the following 20 years, around 28% of the

people

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chose to train and bus as their favourite vehicle to move from and to their workplace. In the latest year from the periods, car users rose dramatically to 37,5%

people

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and being the most preferable

transportation

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to commuting to and from their office.

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, the bus is the

transportation

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with the least users in the year 2000 with only 15%.

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

Many people in poor countries die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication required. Do you believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these countries?