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The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The bar chart below gives information about what
people
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 used to commute from and to their workplace in a certain city in Europe for 40 years. Generally, the preferable mode of
transportation
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 was changed every 20 years. At the beginning of the period which is 1960, most
people
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 use the bus as the main
transportation
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 to travel to and from work almost 40% of the population.
On the other hand
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, the car is the least
transportation
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 used by
people
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 with only 7% of its population. In the following 20 years, around 28% of the
people
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 chose to train and bus as their favourite vehicle to move from and to their workplace. In the latest year from the periods, car users rose dramatically to 37,5%
people
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 and being the most preferable
transportation
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 to commuting to and from their office.
On the other hand
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, the bus is the
transportation
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 with the least users in the year 2000 with only 15%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, transportation with synonyms.
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