Some people think that there are benefits in going to private secondary schools. Others feel that private schools can have negative effects on the society. Discuss both the view and give your opinion?

Some people argue that attending private education at the secondary level is positive,

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others diverge by saying that It can have detrimental consequences. In my

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I firmly believe that choosing

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type of education can be beneficial for the student in the educational approach,

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, its negatives related to the social effect will not overweigh these positives. Considering

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those who believe that

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educational approach is positive, their argument goes that in private

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children

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can have more personalised learning.

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is because as their parents are paying for it, the school adapts the learning rhythm

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the student's pace, which would, ultimately, benefit the pupils.

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, it has been shown that many of these

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provide additional learning opportunities, namely, piano and painting lessons, which are rather difficult to encounter in the public sector.

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can be negative for the brightest pupil, yet poor, because they will not have the chance to develop their skills

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the lack of pecuniary resources.

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the existence of private and public

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increases the social gulf between the less fortunate and the wealthy families, as only the latter would have the financial conditions to have their

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in private education.

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might start, at an early age, to have misconceptions about money, believing that it can pay for anything they like, even without much effort.

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sense of entitlement can, later, impact their adulthood when facing the real world by themselves, as they have not been brought up with the ideal morals and values about money and others as a society. In conclusion,

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there are some advantages related to private

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as the adaption of the pace of the syllabus and the opportunity to learn less conventional subjects, I am a vehement supporter that the moral consequences and misconceptions about money can have a baneful impact on

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on their adult life.