Despite the fact that tourism contributes a great deal to economies around the world, it damages local cultures and the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people assert that

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damages local

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and the natural

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all over the world in spite of the fact it helps economically. Is there any merit to

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belief? There are two reasons to support

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idea:

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, the

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industry does not pay attention to

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and

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nature and

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, governments spend

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amounts of

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on protecting them. First of all, the

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industry tends to ignore the importance of local

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and the natural

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, and concentrate only

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profits. By way of an example, some

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companies made some tours,

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their customers enter protected areas in a national park.

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an article published by the Asahi Shimbun Travelling supplement, more than 50% of companies whose customers are from foreign countries provided illegal tours

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as visiting prohibited areas in a national park because they can get more

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through these tours.

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, the local

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and the

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have been damaged.

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, governments invest

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amounts of

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in preserving local

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and the

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than those

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. Research recently conducted by the university of Tokyo discovered that the Government of Japan does not use enough

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to protect them

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they spend too

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funds on

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. The government can use 6 billion dollars in the cultural and environmental sector a year if they stop wasting

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on

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. As the result, many Japanese people now claim that more budget should be used for

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and the natural

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. In conclusion, there are clear disadvantages to

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as the

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industry and governments do not pay attention to local

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and the

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. They must regard

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and nature as crucial stuff and take action to protect them.