The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use.
The diagram illustrates how to make a store to keep concrete canvas.
Overall
, it can be seen that there are several states to make it, starting with material and ending with storing.
There have 2 processes done at the same time, preparing unwrapping material and another is the manufacturing process that canvas concrete will be made, a piece of concrete is comprised of 3 layers, a fibrous top surface, dry concrete and water prove
layer and Replace the word
proof
then
, both state delivered in a truck.
In the fourth step, material from the first state is roped with a truck for spreading on the ground wide around 10 square metres and being structured by pegs. Next,
air
pump machine will be used to put air out from the underground space before the watering process pours around the underground covered space. Correct article usage
an air
Last
but not least, set a suitable storage area for 20-24 hours before the last
step to keep the concretes inside.Submitted by k.kamonkan on
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