Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that manufactured food and drink contain too

much carbohydrate

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high level of

sugar

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may cause many health problems. Many people think that increasing the cost of these

products

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would reduce their consumption. High levels of

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cause numerous diseases

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as diabetes, obesity, and skin problems,

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, acne, and heart problems

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of being overweight. Increasing taxes on

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which have high levels of

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could lead to a decrease in the consumption of these very harmful foods and move consumers towards healthier

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, if a bottle of coke is sold at a higher

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, the consumers, probably, will buy natural juice at the same

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to replace the coke.

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, In my opinion, changing only the taxes on these

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to increase the

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is not enough to reduce the

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of

sugar

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. Indeed

sugar

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is addictive and so its

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depends on many causes and it can't be reduced simply by operating on

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me , to reduce

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, the government should promote the use of low carbohydrate

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by arranging social awareness campaigns on TV and on the internet, reducing or eliminating taxes on organic foods and

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slogans about potential health issues on sugary

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packaging so that people can be aware and take less amount of

sugar

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in daily life.

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, it is necessary to reduce

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because the diseases provocate by

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have high costs for the community and for individuals and the authorities should make serious efforts to do so.