Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today, big companies spend a huge part of their total expenditure on marketing. They pay for billboards, e-mail notifications and other places to put their
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Consequently
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argue that advertising is no more able to persuade us to purchase its Use synonyms
products
. Personally, I do not completely agree with Use synonyms
this
statement.
On the one hand, when corporations pay for advertising, their main goal is not to make Linking Words
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company’s
or product’s name in our mind. Correct article usage
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For instance
, we could recall Red Bull sponsoring all big Linking Words
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people
who saw their logo will immediately run to stores and buy their energy drinks. Use synonyms
However
, the company knows that if Linking Words
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On the other hand
, some marketing specialists forget that if their product is too naughty and appears everywhere, some Linking Words
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For example
, I know that I will never go to a Linking Words
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Consequently
, I think that it is very important to find the appropriate balance in marketing Linking Words
products
.
In conclusion, I can assume that advertising still works. If 50 years ago its main purpose was to sell Use synonyms
products
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is the point of the statement that advertising is too common to sell us something. Correct pronoun usage
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, it is important not to go Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite