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ome People claims that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. to what extend do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

#ome #people #claims #waste #homes #governments #requirement #laws
One of the most controversial issues around the world is the importance of recycling.Increasing
in
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the
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number of
people
 on the earth
lead
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leads
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 to some crucial problems
such
 as
congestion
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the congestion
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 of garbage.and every nation,
try
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tries
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 to find out the best way to reuse
the
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sustainable
products
such
 as
plastic
.I can neither agree nor disagree with
this
 statement.and in
this
essay
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 I will explain in
details
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 with some examples. On the one hand,the
government
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 duties in
this
 vital issue should not be taken lightly.the reason is that authorities because of their ability to
legistlate
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legislate
 can pass some strict roles for
people
,factories or industries.First of all,
government
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the government
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 should
monitoring
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 the factories regularly to avoid them to produce unnecessary
products
.And force them to pay high
tax
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taxes
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,for excessive
plastic
 or glass
products
.
In addition
,authorities should invest in recycling systems.
for example
,they should spend money to improve the
recycle
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recycling
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 infrastructures to encourage
people
 to recycle their
plastic
from
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at
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 home.
Furthermore
,the government should enhance
people
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people's
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 knowledge about
environment
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the environment
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by
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 some useful
programme
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programmes
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in
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on
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 Tv or
schools
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in schools
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.
On the other hand
,individuals
also
,have a crucial role
to
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 recycling.With
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the advancement
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advancement
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advancements
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 in technology and accessibility of
people
 to
wide
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a wide
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 variety of
products
,and because of the lack of time,they have a tendency to use some harmful
product
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products
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such
 as
plastic
 bags or
plastic
bottels
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bottles
.The reason is that they believe they are more hygienic and convenient.All in all,Every person should take
an
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even simple steps to save our environment from
pollutions
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pollution
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 and garbages.
Peple
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People
 should
also
 learn to recycle their
plastic
wastes
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waste
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 and teach their
childrens
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children
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 how recycling is important for our environment and persuade them to recycle
the
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plastic
 or sustainable
products
 from home.
To sum up
,with the cooperation of
govenments
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governments
 and
people
 we can gain the desired result.And make the earth
better
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a better
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 place to live for
our
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 next generation.
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