You are not satisfied with the service of a restaurant. Write a letter to the manager. 1. Describe the problem 2. Explain how it affected you 3. Suggest what the manager should do.

Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction with the service I experienced at your restaurant

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Sunday evening. To commence with, despite having a reservation, my family and I were kept waiting for over 30 minutes before being seated. Once seated, the staff appeared inattentive, and it took another 25 minutes for our order to be taken. Apart from that, the meals were served cold and lacked the quality I had expected from your establishment.

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situation was not only inconvenient but

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embarrassing, as I had invited guests who were visiting from overseas. The poor service created a negative impression, and we had to leave without enjoying the meal properly. I would appreciate it if you could investigate

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matter and ensure

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incidents do not happen again. As a gesture of goodwill, I suggest offering a refund or a complimentary meal to compensate for the inconvenience. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Smith

vishally.bhardwaj

Sep 11, 2025

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structure

Make one idea in each paragraph. Put one main point in every paragraph.

language

Use clear and short words. Keep the lines short and not long.

content

Add a short note at the end that tells what you want the manager to do now.

tone

Polite tone and clear aim to fix the issue.

content

The problem and effect are easy to see for the manager.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

162 words

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