Human activities is damaging the Earth or making it a better place to live? Do you agree or disagree?

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There is no denying the fact that the main
impact
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of
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on
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is debatable.
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it is a commonly held belief that individuals may harm the surrounding
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, some people believe that
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has
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effect on the
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. From my perspective, I strongly agree that
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work may put
a negative effects
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on the
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. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain why I believe that human
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environment
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negatively. On one hand,
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activities
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can negatively affect the
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.
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, overpopulation
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to increase air pollutions which
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by the use of a high number of cars. To
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, burning gasoline fuels contain greenhouse gases that cause climate change. Indeed,
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makes it clear that
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activities
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might adversely
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the
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, individuals may significantly damage the ecosystem by hunting and fishing.
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, a prestigious journal article published that 20 species had disappeared from the
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as
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of hunting and fishing.
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, the extensive amount of hunting and fishing either for food or sport can
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the food chain as many species started to disappear.
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, it becomes apparent that human
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may strongly harm the
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. In conclusion, In my opinion, I consider that community
activities
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can
impact
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the
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negatively
by
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direct and indirect methods.
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is because of the increasing use of vehicles that burns fuels and increases
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greenhouse gas emissions.
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, hunting and fishing lead to
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in
food
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chain as many species vanished.
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