The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the poplulation age 65 and above in three countries.

The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the poplulation age 65 and above in three countries.
The table compares the variation in the proportion of elderly people
population
rate in
Canada
,
Germany
and The
UK
and it
also
predicts the
population
ratio of 2030 too . Generally speaking , the
population
rate of
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65 and above is going to increase dramatically in all three countries in upcoming years , and
Germany
will account the for most . To be specific ,
Germany
had the most
population
rate in 1988 , with 20% , which was the highest compared to
two
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the two
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other nations , which
maded
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made
up 16%
for
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of
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Canada
and 14%
for
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of
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UK
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the UK
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. In 2000
this
rating had some significant changes in two countries ,
Canada
and
Germany
which rose 16% to 21% and 20% to 25% that year .
Whereas
, The
UK
had only recorded
1
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a 1
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% increase (15%) .
While
it is
forcasted
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forecasted
that all three nation going to have almost 5% surge in 2030
comparing
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compared
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to 2000 with 26% for
Canada
, 30% for
Germany
and a fifth for The
UK
.
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