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some people say that everyone should learn English as their second language while others disagree. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

#people #english #second #language
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People
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 have different
opinion
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opinions
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 some will say
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english
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English
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 should learn by every individual but some are not required. Presently, 95 % of countries advanced with
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English
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the English
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language
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. At
early
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the early
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 stage of
educational
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an educational
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 institution, it is
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 as part of
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the subject
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 to
be learn
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. The upcoming
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paragraphs'
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 importance on linguistics. In
modern
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 world,
people
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interested
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 to move different countries. From pre-nursery, the kids were initiated with
learn
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 and naming things in
other
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another language
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language
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 rather than
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their own
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 tongue.
Every
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 college, textbooks were issued
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English
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hence
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 students could improve their way of understanding the vernacular. As comparing decades
of
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years number of
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school
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been
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increased and more parents supporting
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it. Because
,
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 for built up there carrier everyone come to know
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 is more important.
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,
majority
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the majority
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 of
individual
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individuals
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 will agree
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 the statement. In despite, local
people
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 were
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 about
forgeting
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forgetting
 their own native linguistics. Once
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people
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 started to learn, everywhere especially
educational
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on educational
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board
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, companies preferred to speak in
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inorder
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in order
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 to communicate
other
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country
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countries
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 or states individuals. Nowadays almost places
considering
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it as
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as
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an
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official
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language
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hence
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 the person
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 about
mother
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the mother
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 tongue at
faster
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a faster
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 rate. For
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, in any competition or
events
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event
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 participants will give preference to
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english
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 for speaking because
for
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at
early
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an early
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 stage of
life
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people
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 started
practicing
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practising
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 it for
upcoming
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the upcoming
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 future.
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,
the
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other
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 usage declined at
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a hight
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hight
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high
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 rate.
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,
Individual
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 very less often will speak
therfore
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therefore
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of
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rural
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the rural
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people
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were
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disagree
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this
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 statement. In conclusion, I
am agree
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 with
quote
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 that learning
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english
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 as
second
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a second
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 or first vernacular brings positive to society because nowadays local linguistics don't have much importance
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 everyone should know the skills how to speak
as well as
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 use it.
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