some people say that everyone should learn English as their second language while others disagree. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

People
have different
opinion
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some will say
english
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English
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should learn by every individual but some are not required. Presently, 95 % of countries advanced with
English
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language
. At
early
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the early
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stage of
educational
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institution, it is
considerable
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as part of
subject
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the subject
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to
be learn
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. The upcoming
paragraphs
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importance on linguistics. In
modern
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world,
people
interested
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to move different countries. From pre-nursery, the kids were initiated with
learn
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and naming things in
other
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another language
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language
rather than
own
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their own
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tongue.
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college, textbooks were issued
with
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English
hence
students could improve their way of understanding the vernacular. As comparing decades
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years number of
English
medium
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has
been
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increased and more parents supporting
to
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it. Because
,
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for built up there carrier everyone come to know
language
is more important.
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,
majority
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of
individual
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individuals
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will agree
to
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the statement. In despite, local
people
were
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about
forgeting
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forgetting
their own native linguistics. Once
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people
started to learn, everywhere especially
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on educational
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board
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boards
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, companies preferred to speak in
English
inorder
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in order
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to communicate
other
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with other
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country
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countries
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or states individuals. Nowadays almost places
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it as
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as
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official
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language
hence
the person
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about
mother
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tongue at
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rate. For
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, in any competition or
events
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participants will give preference to
english
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for speaking because
for
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at
early
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an early
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stage of
life
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people
started
practicing
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it for
upcoming
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the upcoming
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future.
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,
the
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other
language
usage declined at
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a hight
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hight
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high
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rate.
Thus
,
Individual
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very less often will speak
therfore
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therefore
most
of
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rural
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people
were
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disagree
to
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with
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this
statement. In conclusion, I
am agree
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with
quote
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that learning
english
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as
second
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a second
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or first vernacular brings positive to society because nowadays local linguistics don't have much importance
hence
everyone should know the skills how to speak
as well as
use it.
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