You are moving to a new city for work and have just realized that an old friend lives in the city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Ask them for advice in finding accommodation • Tell them where you would like to live • Tell them the type of place you are looking for

Dear Jack I hope you are doing well there. I just to ask you for a favour to find an apartment for me. As you know, I was looking for a job and I find in London

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suddenly you came to my mind. my company is not providing me with accommodation, so please help me to find a place to live there. Regard to the location of the house, I would prefer to live near the city

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from where I can easily do the grocery and can find public transport. because I will not able to get the car immediately after reaching there. Concerning London city, I know that the rent over there will be high. but I would prefer to have the house on the ground floor and if possible with a garage.

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, I would love it if there will be a small lawn

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the house, so I can grow some vegetation for myself as you know the I love to do some agricultural things. Hope to see you soon. Yours lovingly, Mandeep

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Feb 20, 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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accommodation
neighborhood
proximity
public transport
lifestyle factors
apartment
shared housing
friendly communities
amenities
parks
cafes
gyms
catch up
explore the city
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