The maps show a road system as it is now and the proposed changes in the future to reduce the number of accidents.

The maps show a road system as it is now and the proposed changes in the future to reduce the number of accidents.
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The maps illustrate a
road
system as it
now
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and the proposed changes in the future to cut down the number of accidents.
Overall
, it can be seen clearly from the map that the
road
will be seen
a
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significant modernization in order to enhance the safety
for
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everyone. One notable feature is that the roundabout will be constructed and more traffic lights will be installed. Looking at the map, we can see that there will be some changes
at
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which accident happens frequently. In the
north-west
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of the
road
,
while
there will be no alternations in the location of the school and the City
road
, 4 traffic lights will be installed in each corner , and the low lane will be removed .
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the middle of the map, the roundabout will be built to merge the city
road
and the forest
road
, which will reduce the accidents on the
road
.
Furthermore
, the supermarket will be constructed in the roundabout which is more convenient for the consumers.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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