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Some people think that teachers are no longer needed because students can study via the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #teachers #students #study #internet
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Teachers
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 are an integral part of an
education
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system
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however
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, some masses deny their contribution because of the involvement of the
internet
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 in
education
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. I personally agree that,
although
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 the
internet
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 has made
education
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 easily accessible to others, the requirements of
teachers
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 can never be ignored.
To begin
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 with, if we consider the past, the teaching
system
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 was fully dependent on
teachers
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 and they not only contributed a lot
in
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 teaching but
also
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 reformed and renovated it.
Moreover
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, with the emergence of the
internet
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, like other sectors, a lot of positive changes have happened in
education
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.
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,
students
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 can attend online classes,
instead
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 of face-to-face if necessary.
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, the best example can be the Covid time
education
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system
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 and a significant number of
students
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 would be outside of
education
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 if there was no
internet
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.
Furthermore
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, the
internet
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 has made the
education
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system
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 easy for others.
For instance
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, we can search for any topic or any article with a single click with the help of the
internet
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.
Although
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education
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 is truly dependent on the
internet
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, it will never outweigh the requirements of
teachers
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 in
education
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. It is not merely the job of a teacher to educate
students
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 rather they reshape and recreate their thoughts and ideals.
Teachers
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 are doing multiple jobs which cannot be fulfilled with the help of the
internet
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.
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, giving lectures, assessing answer sheets, and taking extra care of weaker
students
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 cannot be done by
internet
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.
Teachers
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 are those whose contributions cannot be replaced by anything or anyone.
To conclude
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, the
internet
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 has done a lot for the
education
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system
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 ,
however
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, the
education
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 sector I believe is fully dependent on manpower. Without ,
teachers
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 the purpose and values of
education
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 cannot be justified.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • indispensability
  • tailored guidance
  • mentorship
  • social skills
  • fostering
  • limitations
  • motivation
  • discipline
  • personalized touch
  • adapting learning materials
  • static online content
  • role models
  • curating information
  • facilitate understanding
  • critical thinking
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