The chart below gives the distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016.

The following bar chart illustrates the percentage of car usage all over the world on different continents in 2008 and 2016.

Overall

, it can be easily seen that North

America

and

Europe

have an enormous number of car share,

whereas

compared to other areas like South

America

, Australia and Asia consist little amount. To start with, in 2008,

Europe

had the peak statistics which is a little bit below 60%, after 8 years in 2016 it dramatically declined to almost 30% which is second after North

America

at 50%.

Nevertheless

, North

America

had close to 30% in 2008,

thus

showing that it rose steadily to approximately 20%.

While

North

America

and

Europe

are taking peak placements, areas like South

America

, Australia and Asia all are shown below 10% in 2008 and 2016.

On the other hand

, over time their proportion slightly rose for a couple of digits. In conclusion, global car share is mostly taken by North

America

and

Europe

, having astonishing numbers in comparison to other countries that are not even getting more than 10%.

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