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Some children receive almost no encouragement from their parents regarding their performance at school, while other children receive too much pressure from their over enthusiastic parents which can have a negative impact on the child. Why do you think some parents put too much pressure on their children to perform well at school?

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Some
parents
 do not have any attention to
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their children
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children
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children's
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 academic performance ,
meanwhile
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 a few
guardian
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guardians
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 put too much pressure on their
children
 which has some drawbacks.I think
parents
 do
this
 kind of stuff to ensure a bright future for their kids. first and foremost, some
infant
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infants
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 did not get rewards or encouragement for their good result from their
parents
 because they have a lot of workloads.
In other words
,
parents
who
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whom
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 both
works
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work
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 don't find enough time to think about their
chidren
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children
children's
 education .
For instance
,They hired a good teacher and think that their
children
 will do well in exams which works sometimes.But without ,encouragement they feel useless or not so good in study . Sometimes it leads them in a negative way.
On the other hand
, some
parents
 create an atmosphere where
children
 always think about their
study
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studies
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 and result. Because
parents
 think that without working well in school they are not able to lead a wealthy and happy life .
That is
 why
,
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 today people's first priority
studies
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.
For example
 , in Bangladesh average individuals are not well educated which is a greater obstacle to their happy life.
Hence
,
parents
 don't
want
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towant
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 live their
children
 to how they live.I think they are right because without education no one can compete in
this
 era. In conclusion, without proper guidance
children
 often lose
their
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interest and try to run away from studying.
Although
, too much pressure on the study is hazardous for
children
 . it will assist them to create a good future.
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