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Average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person, 1967-2007

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The line diagram illustrates how much carbon dioxide emissions per individual in the UK Sweden
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 and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
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 , it can be seen that there is a gradually increased in the production of gases in Portugal and Italy
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 downward trend in the other two countries. In beginning, during 1967, Portugal became the least gas emissions country with one metric tonne later there is a considerable rose till 1997 and become stable at 5 metric tonnes in 2007. Another interesting point is that at starting Sweden was the 2nd highest country with around 8.2 tonnes
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 in 1977 there is dramatically increased and become all most highest among all 4 countries but, after ,that there was rapidly dropped down reached almost equal to Portugal .
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 is the largest mission nation starting with around 10.4 tonnes but later gradually decrease and reached almost 8.2 in 2007 and become again
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 production country
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, There is considerable growth in Italy individuals where they begin with 4.1 and became around u 7.8 during 2007 and become 2nd largest .
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