ou and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter: Introduce yourself and your family Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find Give your preference for the location of the accommodation Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: To Whom it May Concern,

#ou #country #work #house #property #agent #type #accommodation #hope #location #addresses #concern

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To Whom It May Concern, I am writing

this

letter to inquire about residential properties on sale in Mississauga, Ontario.

Firstly

, let me introduce myself, I am Sandeep Kaur. I got my permanent residency in Canada a few months back, and I am planning to relocate permanently with my family to Mississauga before the end of 2023. In my family, we are four members, my husband and I, and we have two kids who are under 10 years of age. We are looking for a high-rise building from where we can easily access all public places

such

as hospitals, especially schools as both my kids are school-going.

Moreover

, it would be great if grocery stores and other amenities are within walking distance which can make our life more convenient.

Furthermore

, I would appreciate it if you can find accommodation near the city centre because my office is in the main building in

this

area. One more thing I would like to mention here is our budget, we are looking for a place between $4,50,000 to $5,00,000. I believe I had provide you with sufficient details that assist you to find a suitable home for us. I am looking forward to receiving a booklet of apartments on sale as per our requirements. If you need

further

information, please do not hesitate to write back to me. Kind Regards, Sandeep Kaur

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The Greeting

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Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

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Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

229 words

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The Greeting

Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Government spending on restoration of old buildings in cities should be stopped. Instead they should spend the money for housing and road development. Do you agree or disagree?

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation has more advantages or more disadvantages?