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Some of the local languages are becoming extinct. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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Many national languages have been useless now, as local people prefer learning other tongues.
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, put the cultural values of a nation at risk but, on other hand,
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 provides locals with a platform to sync with foreigners.
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 essay will discuss the pros and cons. To commence, using a foreign lingo may give nations a single platform to communicate globally.
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, better understanding and rapport building is achieved when a speech is delivered and received in the same words.
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, students and employees from different nations may feel comfortable
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 communicating with locals,
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, productivity will go higher.
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, the United States of America has made IELTS compulsory for the applicants for student and employment visas, so that, only those students and workers, who understand and speak the English language, are given admission and offered jobs in the local universities and organizations of America.
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 another view, with the extinction of a national language, cultural values and norms become extinct, which means that the nation will no longer feel a sense of unity.
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, traditional events can not be enjoyed locally, and there would be a big damage to interpersonal relationships.
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 is because of the issue that in the absence of a common mother tongue, emotions can never be delivered and received successfully. In Pakistan,
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, the ethnic groups are united on the basis of their common lingos and preserve their culture,
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 as the Sindhis speak Sindhi, the Punjabis speak Punjabi, the Balochs speak Balochi, and the Pashtuns speak Pashtu.
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, one view is that a common speech is beneficial to achieve better productivity globally,
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according to
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 another view, it is harmful, as traditions can only be preserved in the presence of a national language.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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