Nowadays, online shopping becomes more popular than in-store shopping. Discuss the positive and negative aspects of online shopping and give your own opinion about the topic.
Shopping online has become the most popular trend among shoppers despite both positive and negative outcomes. In my personal opinion,
although
online shopping is more convenient and time-saving there are some drawbacks associated with it.
To start with, the ever-increasing popularity of online shopping has raised some questions about whether it is useful or not. Online shopping is easily accessible to the
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, the purpose of buying something can be fulfilled by ordering with a single click of the mouse. Therefore
, it can save the valuable time of the customers
because they do not require to visit the shopping mall physically. In addtion
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customers
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Conversely
, a huge number of demerits online shopping posses for
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are cheated while
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To conclude
, despite some drawbacks I personally believe that, online shopping has brought a significant change in people's lives. Though it has some disadvatages
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