In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in foinding out bout the history of the house or building they live in

Nowadays, some
people
who have recently bought a
house
or building
curious
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about
the
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past of
its
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it
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. It can be some reasons
about
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why some
people
would do anything for knowing about the
history
on
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of
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their
house
. There are many reasons that someone
want
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to know about the
history
of their building,
such
as
the
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construction
of it. Some
people
want to know if the building
have
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a
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good
construction
or not.
Thus
, many
people
believe if the building
have
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a strong foundation
on
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their home,
so
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it can make them feel safe from
earthquake
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an earthquake
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or other bad conditions.
However
, if the
house
had a bad
construction
, and if there is an earthquake, absolutely the building will destroy and for some
reason
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they will have more
outcome
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to rebuild their building.
On the other hand
, some
people
want to know about the past of the
house
when they bought an old
house
. After that, if the
house
is
haunting
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, they
are
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certainly want to know what was behind
about
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it, why is that
house
haunted?
Furthermore
, if they have a reason
about
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that home, they have
chances
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,
move
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out to another
house
or stay in that home. Almost
people
who want to know something about
the
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construction
can ask it with worker
contsrution
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construction
who
builded
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built
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that building. Some
people
tend to ask about the
house
history
from their neighbours, it can be
easily
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to ask them due
the
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near
from
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their
house
. Perhaps, some neighbours
has
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lived
in
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a long time than other, so they have knowledge about what happened in the past, is there any accident in the
house
or
no
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not
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.
Although
,
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others
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people
who just have moved into their
house
would search about the
history
in
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the Internet, they can easily just type on their gadget.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • In conclusion
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  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
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