many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to cosume less sugar. do you agree or disagree?
It is a widely known fact that food
production
contains a huge amount of sugar and additives, which pose several health problems, Replace the word
product
therefore
, it is suggested to increase the price of sugary snacks and drinks so that the
consumption declines. I agree to some extent with Correct article usage
apply
this
plan but in general, I tend to disagree due to
the following reasons.
Firstly
, products ,which contain sugar, are more affordable than so-called healthy alternatives. It is clear that
not everyone can buy organic and healthy foods. This
is due to
the lack of nutritious value of these products, despite the fact that they are tasty and desirable. Secondly
, unlike other dishes, manufactured foods are not time-consuming and they are beneficial especially for people
who do not have enough time to cook for themselves because of long working hours.
Thirdly
, it is our personal responsibility to maintain our health and to decide whether to listen to the experts or not. Some people
care a lot about their health condition, so they go on healthy diets and do exercises regularly, however
, some do not care enough about their lifestyles. Thus
, it is wrong to prescribe their diets by increasing the prices, because nobody likes that; especially if it is from the government. Lastly
, sugary commodities are only harmful when they are eaten excessively.
In conclusion, we should be careful with the amount of unhealthy food we consume, because making manufactured foods more expensive is not a logical solution and it will not encourage people
to eat more healthy
. So Change the word
healthily
instead
of limiting people
we should increase public awareness.Add a comma
,people
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