Some say that news has no connection with most people’s lives and it is a waste of time for most of us to read newspapers and watch television news programs. Do you agree or disagree?

A group of
people
believe that
news
have
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no impact on
people
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lifes
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lives
and it
destroy
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our valuable time. I completely disagree with
this
statement and believe that
news
makes our
life
more
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easier and improves our surrounding knowledge.
Firstly
, the
news
makes our
life
more easier and comfortable
then
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ever.
In other words
,
news
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is the only way to know the whole world within minutes or
hour
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. Sometimes it saves our
life
.
For example
, in
Bangladesh
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many fishermen
lives
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in
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the seashore, and because of that their lives are always under threat.If they listen to the weather on the tv and try to leave the sea as soon as possible.
Moreover
,
people
also
know about job offers by reading newspapers.
Furthermore
,
news
has a good impact on
people
's behaviour. When someone sees
news
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on tv about various topic ,
thus
, help him or her to compare right and wrong.
For instance
, tv reporters published
news
about terrorists, which assists
people
to know about their bad work .
As a result
,
young
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generation is always
concerns
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about
this
kind of stuff and avoids it.Some
news
programs about the current economy or politics,
which
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help investors to invest their money
i
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proper things.
People
can know about politics and elect their next president . Because they know how much development
was
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happened via
present
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president through
news
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. In conclusion,
news
assists us in various
way
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, though
sometime
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sometimes
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they published the wrong
news
.But, I think the
news
makes our
life
much more frequent and easy.
Along with
it increase our knowledge about the globe.
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