Some say that news has no connection with most people’s lives and it is a waste of time for most of us to read newspapers and watch television news programs. Do you agree or disagree?

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believe that

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no impact on

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our valuable time. I completely disagree with

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makes our

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easier and improves our surrounding knowledge.

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is the only way to know the whole world within minutes or

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. Sometimes it saves our

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the seashore, and because of that their lives are always under threat.If they listen to the weather on the tv and try to leave the sea as soon as possible.

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know about job offers by reading newspapers.

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has a good impact on

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's behaviour. When someone sees

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on tv about various topic ,

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, help him or her to compare right and wrong.

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, tv reporters published

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about terrorists, which assists

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to know about their bad work .

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programs about the current economy or politics,

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help investors to invest their money

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proper things.

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can know about politics and elect their next president . Because they know how much development

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assists us in various

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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263 words

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