The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
The line graph illustrates the
temperature
in three cities
on a monthly average, while
the table gives information about how many sunshine
hours annually in those different cities
.
Overall
, the monthly temperature
trend
in London
and New York
has similar directions, whereas
the temperature
trend
in Sydney
is in contrast
. Although
London
and New York
have almost the same way of monthly temperature
trends, the average amount of sunshine
per year
is not the same.
The average monthly climate in London
and New York
is an upward trend
from the beginning of the year
to around July, which peak at around 23 and nearly 30, respectively. After that, the temperatures in both cities
decrease gradually until they reach the low temperature
in December at just under 10 in London
and exactly 5 in New York
. However
, the weather in Sydney
contrasts with those cities
, starting at just above 25 and then
slightly declining to around 16 in July, which is the lowest-temperature
month in Sydney
, and ,afterwards
the Add a comma
,afterwards
trend
is rise
slowly back to 25 in December
In terms of Change the verb form
is rising
sunshine
hours per year
, London
is the city with the least sunshine
, about 1,180 per year
. Although
the climate trend
is similar to New York
, the average number of sunlight annually differs as much by 1,355. With Sydney
, there is not much difference in the sunshine
in the year
compared to New York
, which accounts for 2,473 and 2,535 in Sydney
and New York
, respectively.Submitted by Taninnuch.tha on
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