The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
The line graph illustrates the
temperature
in three Use synonyms
cities
on a monthly average, Use synonyms
while
the table gives information about how many Linking Words
sunshine
hours annually in those different Use synonyms
cities
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the monthly Linking Words
temperature
Use synonyms
trend
in Use synonyms
London
and New Use synonyms
York
has similar directions, Use synonyms
whereas
the Linking Words
temperature
Use synonyms
trend
in Use synonyms
Sydney
is Use synonyms
in contrast
. Linking Words
Although
Linking Words
London
and New Use synonyms
York
have almost the same way of monthly Use synonyms
temperature
trends, the average amount of Use synonyms
sunshine
per Use synonyms
year
is not the same.
The average monthly climate in Use synonyms
London
and New Use synonyms
York
is an upward Use synonyms
trend
from the beginning of the Use synonyms
year
to around July, which peak at around 23 and nearly 30, respectively. After that, the temperatures in both Use synonyms
cities
decrease gradually until they reach the low Use synonyms
temperature
in December at just under 10 in Use synonyms
London
and exactly 5 in New Use synonyms
York
. Use synonyms
However
, the weather in Linking Words
Sydney
contrasts with those Use synonyms
cities
, starting at just above 25 and Use synonyms
then
slightly declining to around 16 in July, which is the lowest-Linking Words
temperature
month in Use synonyms
Sydney
, and ,Use synonyms
afterwards
the Add a comma
,afterwards
trend
Use synonyms
is rise
slowly back to 25 in December
In terms of Change the verb form
is rising
sunshine
hours per Use synonyms
year
, Use synonyms
London
is the city with the least Use synonyms
sunshine
, about 1,180 per Use synonyms
year
. Use synonyms
Although
the climate Linking Words
trend
is similar to New Use synonyms
York
, the average number of sunlight annually differs as much by 1,355. With Use synonyms
Sydney
, there is not much difference in the Use synonyms
sunshine
in the Use synonyms
year
compared to New Use synonyms
York
, which accounts for 2,473 and 2,535 in Use synonyms
Sydney
and New Use synonyms
York
, respectively.Use synonyms
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