You went to another city for a training course and stayed at a friend’s house for a week. They have been great hosts. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, thank them for having you at their house for a week express your gratitude for their hospitality say how much you miss them

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Dear Lily, How are you? I hope that you and your family are in good health and mood. I am writing

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letter to express my gratitude to Lily and her family. I would like to express my gratitude to you and your parents because you have shown support and kindness. I want to say a big thank you to your parents who treated me like their own child. If you had not left, I would have had to stay in the apartment. But thanks to you and your family, it did not happen like that. I am very happy with hospitable people like you I thank you for cooking all kinds of food for me cheering me up and supporting me. I miss you so much because I am attached to your home and family. I hope to meet again soon. Best wishes Gulsanam

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coherence cohesion

You have structured the letter in a logical manner but ensure each paragraph is centered around a single idea to increase clarity.

task achievement

Your letter successfully addresses all three points of the task. However, consider expanding on each point, perhaps giving specific examples of the kindness and support you received, to further improve task achievement.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriately informal and friendly for a letter to a friend, which is good. Keep maintaining this tone in future letters.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

145 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactiory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example, working for charity, improving the neighborhood, or teaching sports to the younger). To what extent do you agree or disagree?