Experts claim that if older people do more exercise they will be healthier and happier. However, many elderly people suffer from a lack of fitness. What are the causes of this and what are some possible solutions?
Experts affirm that if elderly citizens do more frequent some
type
of exercise
they will feel in optimus
conditions and happier. Change the capitalization
Optimus
However
, many of these people
suffer from a
poor health. Some of the causes are that they feel scared to do Remove the article
apply
exercise
and they have no energy to start doing any type
of physical activity and some
of the possible solutions are visiting a physical therapist and Correct quantifier usage
apply
perform
passive Wrong verb form
performing
acitvities
to keep in great health.
One of the causes of elderly Correct your spelling
activities
people
refuse
to Wrong verb form
refusing
do
Unnecessary verb
apply
exercise
is that most of them feel scared to fall down, so they try to not doing
anything to feel safe. Wrong verb form
do
Fisrtly
, many mature Correct your spelling
Firstly
people
suffer from fractures due to
falls because they lose the ability of
reflexes. Change preposition
to
Secondly
, most of them have no energy to star
doing Correct your spelling
start
exercise
because they
most of the Correct pronoun usage
apply
times
are Fix the agreement mistake
time
sat
down or lying down, so they start feeling tired and weak. Wrong verb form
sitting
For instance
, the University of Fullerton made a
research in 1995 that states those elderly Remove the article
apply
people
who stayed more than four hours sitting down, they
start losing muscle andCorrect pronoun usage
apply
they
might suffer from falls more frequently.
One of the solutions is that these mature citizens should visit a physical therapist to be Correct pronoun usage
apply
asssisted
and perform some Correct your spelling
assisted
type
of physical activities
. Fix the agreement mistake
activity
Moreover
, most of these people
who are attended by a professional are taught to do the right exercise
and they learned how to move. Another solution is that people
who does
Change the verb form
do
exercise
feel more energetic and increase their chances to keep in great health. By doing passive movements many of them might lower the possibilities
of not suffering from chronic diseases like Diabetes Fix the agreement mistake
possibility
type
II and arthritis. To explain further
, the university of Los Angeles made a study that states that mature society
that Fix the agreement mistake
societies
keep
active and Change the verb form
keeps
perform
daily physical activities have more chances to keep healthier and they might lower the chances of suffering from Change the verb form
performs
chonic
disease Correct your spelling
chronic
due to
keeping passive movements such
as swimming.
To conclude
, elderly people
who want to keep healthier need to do some type
of physical activity as wel
as Correct your spelling
well
being
attended by a professional to learn how to do these physical activities; Wrong verb form
be
however
, many of them are scared of falling down and they tend to suffer from low energy and tiredness. If these issues are not addressed properly they might end it
up Correct pronoun usage
apply
of
losing their Change preposition
apply
strengthen
eventually.Replace the word
strength
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