Governments should spend money to encourage the development of sport and art for school students rather than supporting professional sports and art performances for the public. Do you agree or disagree?

As society is advancing by leaps and bounds, people attach great importance to

sports

and

arts

. Under

this

circumstance, an absolute consensus can hardly be reached as to whether

money

should be spent on developing

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sports

and

arts

in schools rather than wasting

money

on professional events. For my part, I side with the advocates to the large extent based on the following sound reasons.

Firstly

, it is noteworthy that it would be a huge chance for each individual to enhance their skills not only in academic subjects

such

as maths or languages but

also

in physics or creativity

such

as

sports

and

arts

. Many studies have shown that

although

it is invisible, receiving

supporting

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from the

government

could help students become more confident in improving themselves.

For example

, I have a Japanese friend, who had to cycle almost 25 kilometres every day in order to get to the nearest stadium, to practice basketball, which was his hobby

as well as

his talent. The reason was in his high school, there was no space for him to practice.

However

, at

this

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end, he had to give up

due to

the bad condition

on

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the road between his house and the stadium. In case, if his school was supported by the authorities to have a good enough place for him and his friends to play basketball, he could follow his dream until now.

Secondly

, another reason why I agree is that I believe that

this

is a way to motivate children to develop their creativity and

also

a way to keep talented people in the country. It is undeniable that the more talents representing a nation take part in international contests, the more profits and values that the

government

receive from other countries.

For instance

, unlike other nations' soccer teams, in Vietnam, youngsters who love soccer are always provided opportunities to improve their abilities.

Therefore

, even though other countries tried to have our talents with a large amount of

money

, our famous soccer players still play for Vietnam, because they know where they were born and raised and are loved by the

government

. In conclusion, I am convinced that the

government

should invest

money

to

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schools for supporting

sports

and

arts

, rather than using

money

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for professional performance for the public.