Governments should spend money to encourage the development of sport and art for school students rather than supporting professional sports and art performances for the public. Do you agree or disagree?

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As society is advancing by leaps and bounds, people attach great importance to
sports
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and
arts
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. Under
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circumstance, an absolute consensus can hardly be reached as to whether
money
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should be spent on developing
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sports
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and
arts
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in schools rather than wasting
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on professional events. For my part, I side with the advocates to the large extent based on the following sound reasons.
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, it is noteworthy that it would be a huge chance for each individual to enhance their skills not only in academic subjects
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as maths or languages but
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in physics or creativity
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as
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and
arts
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. Many studies have shown that
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it is invisible, receiving
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from the
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could help students become more confident in improving themselves.
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, I have a Japanese friend, who had to cycle almost 25 kilometres every day in order to get to the nearest stadium, to practice basketball, which was his hobby
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his talent. The reason was in his high school, there was no space for him to practice.
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, at
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end, he had to give up
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the bad condition
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the road between his house and the stadium. In case, if his school was supported by the authorities to have a good enough place for him and his friends to play basketball, he could follow his dream until now.
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, another reason why I agree is that I believe that
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is a way to motivate children to develop their creativity and
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a way to keep talented people in the country. It is undeniable that the more talents representing a nation take part in international contests, the more profits and values that the
government
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receive from other countries.
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, unlike other nations' soccer teams, in Vietnam, youngsters who love soccer are always provided opportunities to improve their abilities.
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, even though other countries tried to have our talents with a large amount of
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, our famous soccer players still play for Vietnam, because they know where they were born and raised and are loved by the
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. In conclusion, I am convinced that the
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should invest
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schools for supporting
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and
arts
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, rather than using
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money
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for professional performance for the public.
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