The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008

The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008
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The circle graphs illustrate the information on the percentage of electricity produced by fossil
fuel
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, Hydropower and Nuclear
power
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in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008.
Overall
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, Morocco and
Vietnam
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did not use Nuclear energy as a source of producing electricity
while
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India
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and
Sweden
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vice versa. In general, Hyrdo
power
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and fossil
fuel
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were taken advantage of by supplying electric
power
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in 4 countries.
To begin
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with, fossil
fuel
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was the main electric source of
India
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and
Vietnam
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at respectively 82% and 56%, accounting for over half of both charts. Meanwhile, Hydroelectric was the second mentioned, particularly accounting for 44% of
Vietnam
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's sources which was more than over three times of
India
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.
Vietnam
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did not produce energy based on nuclear
power
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whereas
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India
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used precisely 4%. In the
Sweden
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and Morocco charts, there is obvious Hydropower was the most priority that Morocco used a significant percentage, approximately 95% and only 5% of electrical energy was manufactured on fossil
fuel
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while
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the hydro
power
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-based of
Sweden
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accounted for 52% and the fossil
fuel
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, only 4%.
In particular
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,
Sweden
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became the most Nuclear
power
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-used country with 44% of the amount of electricity by
this
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kind of
power
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in the 4 mentioned countries.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words fuel, power, vietnam, india, sweden with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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