The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
The line graph provides information about how many
visitors
travelled to a particular Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. Overall
, it is clear that
the number of total tourists has the biggest numerous people
, followed by visitors
staying on cruise ships and staying on the island respectively from 2010 to 2017.
To begin
, the number of total visitors
was
increased dramatically between 2010 and 2015, Unnecessary verb
apply
stood
at 1 million Wrong verb form
standing
of
Change preposition
apply
people
and at around 2.7 million people
. After that, it remained constantly
in Change the word
constant
years
2015 and 2016. Correct article usage
the years
Then
, it had a substantial rose trend until the end of the period time.
In terms of the number of visitors
staying on the island stood at about 0.7 million people
in the beginning year, and it stabilized until 2011, whereas
visitors
staying on cruise ships began at around 0.2 , the latter went up higher than the former at the end
of the period year shown.Submitted by evetanyaporn on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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