the graphs show basic information about employment
The following graph indicates data about
employment
rates of the two genders in six different countries between 1995 and 2005. Overall
in Australia, Iceland and New Zealand male hiring differs considerably from females
in both years.
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female
According to
the bar ,chart
we can see that the highest male Add an article
the chart
employment
number is in Iceland and it is around seventy per cent
. ,However
in ,2005 it rose to over eighty per cent
. Also
if we look at women's recruitment in the year 2005 we are able to find that it was above forty per cent
and after another ten ,years it didn't change a lot only to ten per cent
.
While
in the USA the situation was completely different. For instance
, back in 1995 female employment
was near to forty per cent
and it is clear that
now it rose to sixty per cent
. On the other
hand
male community experienced only half of the growth of females, by 10% from 60 to 70%.
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,hand
although
men's employment
was higher than women's, it didn't face such
a rise as females.Submitted by Abdu.abetayev on
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