You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The maps illustrate a bookshop in 2000 and now, many things are changed in
this
bookstore.
Overall
, comparing the two maps, many book
shells
are managed to belong in the room. Not only are
shells
replaced but
also
new items are put inside. Looking
firstly
at the year 2000,
fiction
is the largest number of
books
in
this
place, there have two big
shells
on the left of the entrance and another one was set close to the opposite side of the entrance.
Three
kinds of
books
were categorized into
three
shells
which were laid in the centre of
this
room ,between the travel book shell and the
fiction
shell. Moving on to the second map, it can be seen that
three
table sets with 4 chairs are put in the centre of the bookshop
instead
of
three
book
shells
( Art,Hobbies and Cookery).
Moreover
,
Fiction
books
are reduced and set in a smaller shell.
While
, Non-
fiction
is taken place
by
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the Café zone, and it is moved in opposite the entrance
instead
of
Fiction
books
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "instead".
Vocabulary: Replace the words shells, fiction, books, three with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "set" was used 3 times.
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